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i think it sounds pretty good. maybe have more space between lines especially in the second paragraph so it is easier to read. there is nothing wrong with your english

maybe list or bullet point your “other skills”

OK, some corrections:
1. “in the UK” – It’s important not to leave the definite article off before abbreviations for countries like the USA, the UK, the UAE, the USSR etc.
2. Delete “overall” and ammed this part: “. . . in design and IT, four years of which were purely in a .NET environment.”
3. Change “I also have an experience in. . .” to “I also have experience in . . .”

Other than that, it’s good! Well done.

Hi my name is Aleksei.

I am a freelance software and web page developer based in Tallinn, Estonia. I also do freelance work in the UK.
I have been working with clients locally and internationally.
I have 11 years of experience in graphic designs and IT (what does IT stand for?) work, with the last 4 years exclusively with in the NET environment (again, what does NET stand for?).
I am Microsoft certified and a Professional developer, using all Microsoft Technologies and Products.
Personal or Professional design can be developed to fit all your personal and or professional needs.
We can design a web page for you company, it’s products and services.
If you are looking for a professionally designed web page do not hesitate to contact me.

Technical Skills

Program languages:
C#, ASP .NET, T-SQL, HTML, CSS, LINQ, AJAX, Java Script, Web Services, ADO.NET, XSTL, XML, XAML,Windows Services, Microsolft Office for Applications.

Databased: SQLServer 2008-6.5, Microsoft Access, Oracle, XML.

Other Skills: Able to use all applications (MS Visual Studio, MS Expression Blend, Adobe Photo shop, Illustrator, Dream-weaver etc etc), and from time to time I’ve been known to illustrate and design for print. I also have an experience in photography and 3D rendering and animation using 3D MAX and V-Ray.

Download the latest version of my C.V. (.pdf document).
Download list of my previous development projects (.pdf document).

Take a look at my version of your advertisement, this is how I would most likely make one for my self, but the best advise I can give or any one trying to or planning on making any kind of advertisement is to KISS, Keep it Simple Silly or Stupid which ever you prefer.

Good luck and Keep the Faith….peace….